We MUST protect out oceans! We have been littering and all OUR rubbish is going to the oceans. We HAVE TO stop this and make sure in NEVER happens again.
We must help our oceans, to do this we must stop littering! Stop letting balloons go into the atmosphere and stop kicking balls into the oceans. SO many kids have kicked their balls into the ocean!
We can help by putting rubbish into bins and not overflowing ones. Our oceans have been going brown and its FRIGHTENING.
We have to protect our oceans to make our world a better place!
Hello, you have written your piece with great passion. Using lots of strong words like, “must” has helped you do this. It was good, too, how you provided examples of what is happening so that the reader can immediately see how they can help (if they are doing any of the things you say are causing a problem). Well done.